I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Thursday, 21 November 2019
Trip To Capital E
Yesterday we went to Capital E to make music. We had to be with partners so my partner was Lizzie. We had so much fun making music. Ours had a little rock metal, Jazz, Guitar, Drums and violin. Ours was very calm and nice at the beginning then it went to very angry and heavy metal. At the end we listened to everyone's music and we really enjoyed it.
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Nice work jeana I like your picture and the story you wrote.
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I couldn't remember a lot from Capital E
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