I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Monday, 16 December 2019
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Kia Ora Jeana, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have done an outstanding job on your list! You’ve really thought of everything, and I like that you have included explanations for some things as well!
You’re the first person who’s post I’ve read that has included water! That’ll be vital and definitely keep everyone on board in peak condition. Very clever of you to include!
I like that you have included certain things for specific meals as well. Its smart to include foods for breakfast and morning tea to ensure your crew is fed well at all points of the day. I also appreciate your inclusion of things for sandwiches as well as healthy snacks.
What is your favourite chip flavour? Bluebird chips are nice, but I think I’m a burger ring kind of girl. I see you’ve also included green apples. Are they your favourite fruit? Mine are nectarines or raspberries. They’re delicious and I’m super excited because we’re coming into their season now for Christmas!
Perhaps you could add some graphics to your post to enhance the reading experience. If you need help or inspiration to do this, look at these tips for making eye catching blog posts
Mā te wā
Shannon